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Saturday, October 6, 2012

Illustrating Expanded Sentences - Freebie

We are still expanding sentences.

We will be expanding sentences for awhile.

Probably all year.

But we are getting better!

And they like doing it!

After I gave them the sentence stems I posted earlier (click HERE to go to that post), I realized that drawing a picture of the sentence helped the kiddos see how using descriptive words  improved their writing.
So I decided to try getting them to illustrate the sentences each step along the process. Looking at a picture seems to help them realize they need to add more details to their writing.
Here are some of the results.





Click on the pic below if you want the recording sheet.
Have a great weekend!


3 comments:

  1. This is so timely....just what I need right now :) Thank you for sharing.

    ~Stephanie
    Teaching in Room 6

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